I had to re render this 6 times... There was a lot of weird flickering and I had no idea what was causing it, I still don't actually, but moving the camera to a new location stopped it.
It does have some camera movement at the start. I'm not really looking to do more of that in VR because it can be nauseating, but I would like to do more intro's with a stationary camera in the future - it just wasn't possible for this one.