Hey friends, attached are two WIPs for my current movie's intro

Please let me know what you think, I wanna make this great

Issues:
Audio seems to slightly disjoint near the halfway point?
Some animations could be a bit more snappy

If you see something that looks odd, please let me know!

( second video link is here because patreon hates uploads apperently ) 

https://mega.nz/file/NCYAFIYC#mFYSTsJ3E-JcO59_vtxVpRv94jF4oTD-7SN6Hw3kZQc