thank you for the feedback, it seems like just about everybody is interested so I've been working further on it, and I've added things based on comments 

here's an updated rough storyboard, and some wip backgrounds/assets i've painted

eleven animated shots might prove more than i want to promise so some shots might get cut, i might switch one out with missionary too. I've left the form up in case anyone else still wanted to comment, which you can find here:

thanks!